Chapter 7: Newton

Chapter 7 is online at http://www.WebFeats.com/Transition/7.html.

This was originally part of a longer chapter – but as I explained previously, I interposed another chapter for pacing. What do you think? Should I have left the material as one, longer chapter? Does my "pacing" chapter add to the suspense or destroy the continuity?

You'll notice that this chapter contains very little dialogue (two words). This is in marked contrast to most of my chapters, which probably contain too much dialogue, which I enjoy writing much more than I do narrative. (Maybe I should be writing a screenplay instead of a novel.)